Excerpt Three from IF YOU STAY

23 Jan

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It’s time for another excerpt from IF YOU STAY!  *does a happy dance*

This excerpt is from Pax’s point of view.


I step toward her and she looks uncertain, but she doesn’t move away.

“Men are visual too,” I tell her softly, my eyes frozen on hers.  “So I understand.  But there is something that bothers me, something that puts me at a disadvantage.  And I really don’t like feeling disadvantaged.”

“What is it?” she asks, her eyes not leaving mine.

“You’ve seen me at my worst.  Maybe you should see me at my best.”

My words hang between us, heavy and charged, and I don’t know what the fuck I am doing.

“When are you at your best?” she asks hesitantly.  And I can see from the determined look on her face that she is trying hard not to feel intimidated.  I’m impressed.  She’s like a kitten standing up to a lion.

“In bed.”

My answer is simple.  And her eyes shoot sparks in response.

“You’re kind of arrogant, aren’t you?” she demands, her hands on her slender, paint-spattered hips.  “A simple Thank you for saving my life would suffice.  I don’t need for you to carry me off to your bed to show your gratitude.”

I pause for a minute before I try to smooth her ruffled feathers.

“Calm down,” I tell her quietly.  “I’m sorry.  It’s a habit.  I was just joking. Sometimes I have an inappropriate sense of humor.  Thank you for the other night. I’m sorry I didn’t say it before.”

She purses her lips and then sighs.

“It’s okay,” she answers.  “And you did say it in the hospital.  You didn’t need to come here and say it again.  I have been wondering though…” and her voice trails off.

It’s her turn to stare at me now and her gaze is contemplative.  I stare back unflinching.

“What?” I prompt.  “What have you been wondering?”

“Why did you do it?” she asks softly.  “Why would you do that?  It seems like you have a wonderful life.”

I’m surprised again.  This girl is very direct and doesn’t hesitate to say what she’s thinking.  And she thinks that I purposely tried to kill myself.  What the fuck?

On the one hand, her direct attitude is refreshing.  I have a feeling that she doesn’t play games.  But on the other hand, it’s annoying as hell.  Because sometimes I like to get lost in games so that I don’t have to provide any real answers.

But I have a feeling that Mila doesn’t tolerate bullshit.

“It was an accident,” I shrug.  “I was being careless.  It won’t happen again.”

She’s still staring at me and I fight the urge to flinch.  It’s like she’s looking inside of me, trying to pick me apart and examine me.  I don’t like it.

“Really?” she asks. She sounds doubtful, unsure.  “I hope not.  If you’re lying, I hope you get help. I might not be there next time to save you.”

She turns on her heel and heads for the back room.  And just like that, Mila the artist with the wholesome smile walks out of my life.

I’m surprised by how much I don’t like the feeling.


Eeeeep. There you have it.    I’ll try to post another excerpt next week, even though I’ll be on vacation.   And in case you missed it, you can enter to win a signed ARC of If You Stay here. 

Have a great Wednesday!


2 Responses to “Excerpt Three from IF YOU STAY”

  1. Mary January 23, 2013 at 2:45 pm #

    wow can’t wait for the book

  2. Dione Sage January 23, 2013 at 5:52 pm #

    WOW, love this excerpt! Can’t wait to read this book!!

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